Build a simple message hierarchy
Start with a short headline that carries the main idea without requiring supporting context. Add only the essential detail needed to understand the offer, event or brand message. Finish with one direct call to action when an action is appropriate. Multiple headlines, long explanations and several competing actions can weaken the concept.
Read the copy as if encountering it during a restaurant visit or hotel stay. It should also make sense during a campus stop or event. The message should still make sense without a lengthy introduction. Keep essential brand wording prominent and move secondary information out of the main visual area. Juice Boxx confirms current options during the inquiry.
